Production: Second draft of front cover (PC)

After taking all of my audience's comments on board I developed my second draft of my front cover design on Photoshop.



Positives:

• Like how the masthead is at an odd angle - connotes fun and informal air to the magazine.


• Like how the cover and strap line is set out- equally spaced so that the reader can read what the main sell of the magazine is without having to read a whole lot.


• The informal language - appeals to the teenage audience.


• Evenly spaced out.


• Like the puff - informal and draws in readers as it gives them something that the other magazines can't.
  

Negatives:

• If the competition bubble was moved down then both the main sell and coverline could also be moved down leaving enough space so that the readers can see the cover shot fully.